Just thought i'd post something for a change. Feel free to comment.
soundcloud.com/swal

Thanks Heaps,
swaL

I know this forum is mostly Dub/Technoie tunes so I thought I'd have a go myself.

www.soundcloud.com/swal/s-day

I like it. Stripes seems like the framework for some vocals. S-Day has a nice feel, but too much wobble going on for my taste (in my completely non-professional point of view).

S-day is great! Love that tune. Definitely a change from the filthy dubstep I've been listening to =P.

Awesome my friend, esp like stripes

cheesey

Ahaha, thanks for your thoughts evry1

Liking the chilled out vibes, man!

Techno/Dance

soundcloud.com/swal/show-stopper

Love the tune mate, Not so keen on the vocal though but that's my non-professional opinion lol.

Karl

Karl37 wrote:
Thanks for listening Karl. I too was unsure about the vocal sample but I desperately wanted to try it.

Yeah, its just personal taste really. I may not be keen on the vocal but someone else will love it.

Chilled bit of dub

soundcloud.com/swal/within-an-inch

swaL wrote:
Good Morning,

I just thought I'd let you know I updated The Show Stopper. I've fixed the vocal sample issue!
Cheers Karl & Fred. Hope you like it.
swaL

Much better mate, Its still not to my taste but I do love the music, Very chilled, Good job.

Karl

Awesome, I appreciate the listen!

Need your opinion about my Lars Leonhard rmx.

2 Different Tracks - the newest one, i tried to make it "clubby" - but i´m not fully satisfied! Why?
The infected remix - like it - but it´s a demo-mastering - what could i improve?

1) soundcloud.com/jfadljevic/lars-leonhard-olearia-jgekko
2) soundcloud.com/jfadljevic/lars-leonhard-infected-remix

Thanx for your comments! Cheers

Track 1 - If i were to improve this track it would be the chords....give them some variation, change em up on every 16th maybe, filter them, add serious delay effects maybe even layer them but have the layered version doing something else. experiment mate. Cracking track though.

Track 2 - This is beautiful, again try filter effects on that bass. play with some white noise and sidechain it to your hats or something busy. I wanna hear more subtle whooshes. great work though mate, lovely production.

Karl
soundcloud.com/karl_37

Dear Karl,

thanx for your advices. I know what you mean, i´d the same ideas. But my great problem is, that i loose so much headroom with the filters (compressor, limiter, delay, ping-pong, saturation...) - it´s getting a sound soup!
I work on ableton for apr. 1,5 years (only in my sparetime - every 3rd day from 18:00 to 0:00). I need a lot of practice on the effect´s. So - from your advice - i´ve to see a tutorial about layering.

Track2 - i´m not satisfied with the hat, too - to dirty and to much in the front of the sound.
Track1 - if i listen to it with my headphones it´s really pumping. On the monitors too, but on my car radio "just a mess" (MP3 file 256kb)

The more i work on my mastering, the more my creativity sinks. Less is more, i think!!!
I think my next track, will be reduced to 4 lines with atmosph. chords, wobling bassline, good drummset and one for fx/vocal sounds.

Would be nice, to stay in contact. I will listen to your tracks on soundcloud before my producing starts today!

Cheers and many thanx!
Jürgen

I finished my rework on the track soundcloud.com/jfadljevic/lars-leonhard-olearia-jgekko

and now i not shure, if i should leave the track od delete it. I cant get the best out of this track - and i listened so many times, that i´ve no idea!

I think the cords are too loud and sometimes a little bit out of rhythm.

I think you know, how hard it is, to kill a track! But be honest!

Thanx
jgekko